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a place in my head!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 02:43:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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slowly,yet surely i am awoken,
by the vioce,but one are there to have spoken,
my body and brain is broken,
and my woondes hold a death token.
the blood round my lips is dried,
and won't set free any more of my cries,
it hurts real bad around my eyes,
i don't even want to hear the word lies,
with my rists behind,
my back,by steel chains i am tied!!
the whispers in the dark,
give to no where to hide,
the walls around me caving in,
rip away all of my pride,
and with my blood hot as it is,
'lucky i ain't fried,
and with the straining on my lungs,
i guess i'm lucky to be ALIVE!
But with time going,as quick as it does,
and with my mind flowing,and bleeding out puss,
and the words,not retreating,and comming as far as they do go,
and me being beaten blue, from head to toe,
and with the chains so tight, i can't even move,
and with the pain inside,i've nothing to loose!!
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2004-01-05 14:43:27]
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Re: a place in my head!
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 03:59:31 PM AEST
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wow this is a very sad but very beatiful write.. I can relate to this a few years ago.. great poem
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Re: a place in my head!
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by LouisaMontagu on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 10:15:46 AM AEST
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I luv this, i have been trying to explain this for along time about how i feel, its seems u have just done exactly that... im workin on my next 1 @the mo.. Im sure u have ur reasons 4 feelin like this, i do mine.. keep battling and keep that pen n paper near.... my wrk can b sen on www.poetrypoems.com/poet2002 plz feel free to mail me xxx
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