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Unborn Child
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 02:20:49 PM in AEST
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I Pictured you with brown hair, and hazel eyes,
with skin as soft, as the clouds in the sky.
A little round face, with bright rosy cheeks,
and little pink lips, that pucker while you sleep.
A true blessing given from God above,
a child conceived in the union of love.
Your little fingers wrapped around my thumb,
and soon those little feet, will learn how to run.
But soon you’ll be growing up, and growing up too fast,
such a picture of beauty, from each stage you’ll pass.
There will be lessons to learn, and promises to keep,
but right now sweet baby, you continue to sleep.
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Re: Unborn Child
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by humphdj on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 11:25:46 PM AEST
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Beautiful!
Rgds
Dave |
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 14th July 2002 @ 01:40:19 AM AEST
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This is gorgeous Jeff! ...
Chrissie x |
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by jewelry726 on
Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 09:26:09 AM AEST
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| how sweet an nicely wrote |
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Re: Unborn Child
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 12:28:04 AM AEST
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Oh Jeff...this is such a beautiful poem!! So well written also...
Jenni |
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by princesspurty on
Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 10:13:08 AM AEST
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| very sweet, babies are a special gift |
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by smokey on
Saturday, 31st August 2002 @ 07:04:26 AM AEST
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| Jeff this is a beautiful poem I too just recently lost a child of my own so I know what your feeling, again this is great. |
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by Justice3310 on
Friday, 6th September 2002 @ 12:56:50 AM AEST
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| i just gave birth to a premmie she was two pounds 1 ounce when she was born although i did not loose her i watched her struggle i am sorry for your loos but i know God will bless you |
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by Q-DiZzY on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 01:40:33 PM AEST
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Brilliant piece Jeff...good job
~1~ |
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Re: Unborn Child
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by Opium on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 03:16:58 AM AEST
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| Une chef d'oeuvre! a master piece, very well written. |
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by LostDream on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 04:53:22 AM AEST
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Jeff,it's simply wondeful.
Thank you!
Sara |
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by juliette on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 11:39:26 AM AEST
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| Awwww.......beautiful write!! |
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by DarkerSeason on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 12:44:19 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. This was very pleasant and it made me think about myself and how I have grown up over the years. Good use of imagery. Keep up the good work. |
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by Violet_Apted on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 05:04:24 AM AEST
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| Great poem! Violet |
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by lilch4ever on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 05:14:08 PM AEST
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| That was just to cute:) |
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Re: Unborn Child
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by MoonLite on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 07:47:51 PM AEST
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| Nice job!! |
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 10:14:20 PM AEST
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| thats really good. the description is sweet. Keep writing |
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by ladymae3 on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 04:30:06 PM AEST
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| it was really good, BUT i didnt like ur technique in ryhming it kept ur emotions a bit confined and at points u seem to search for words. |
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by xlguesswho14xx on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 08:57:30 PM AEST
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| I love your poem! It really touched me. |
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by angelness on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 08:28:53 PM AEST
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| this is so beautiful and touching! |
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by orangeman on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 01:39:21 AM AEST
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that is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! good job!
L.L |
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Re: Unborn Child
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by Desi on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 06:46:32 PM AEST
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Its beautiful. Babies are a beautiful, wonderful gift. Treat it well.
~Desi~ |
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 03:18:39 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful. What more can I say.
ShadowsCloud |
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by stargazer on
Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 08:28:49 AM AEST
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This was amazingly beautiful. It touched me deeply.
-Amy |
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by Aika on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 09:56:04 AM AEST
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having my own two lil ones, i know what it means, more I felt your words, simply sweet:-)
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by viki on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 01:48:56 PM AEST
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| Very emotional poem. Sad to think of how many people get abotions. |
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by ammalu on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 02:47:56 AM AEST
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| Really touching - I too have experienced the grief - yes, one shd. be blessed by GOD to get a child BORN - compliments for such a good expression. |
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by critterhideaway on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 02:40:21 PM AEST
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| Very nicely written. Anyone who has lost a child can relate to the dreams lost. |
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by Seans_Girl on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:34:33 PM AEST
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Aww.. this is so sweet! Congratulations! I also am expecting twins. Good Luck!
*Natalie* |
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by inoc on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:37:55 AM AEST
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Arn't babies so beautiful
this poem says it all
I loved every line
cheers! |
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by spyke_420 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 02:29:06 AM AEST
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Wow....all I have to say is wow...but a godd wow.
~~Spyke~~
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by Willofree on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 04:34:31 PM AEST
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I'm a new comer to this site, and just selected this poem at random. I'm glad I did, it is a beautiful write. A picture of wonder and innonence.
Bless the children
Willofree |
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by jade01 on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 08:50:06 PM AEST
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| That poem is so sweet!! Very Touching |
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:46:43 PM AEST
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So beautiful!
Spazzo |
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by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:24:12 PM AEST
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Very beautiful poem....
Keep writing
Lots of love
xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx
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by catz77 on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 01:58:31 PM AEST
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| this is one of the best poems i've read since i've been here |
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by Kachina on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:51:25 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful. |
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 01:26:48 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write, absolutely beautiful! |
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by handsomeheart2000 on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 01:53:06 AM AEST
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| all I would like to say in three letters "W-O-W" |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 09:56:13 PM AEST
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| Wonderfully done :) |
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by crazygirl on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 07:06:13 PM AEST
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| Wow, awesome. You bring men to a new level in my eyes. Im not trying to be sexist but, i never would've expected anything like this from the male gender. It was truly beautiful!! |
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 10:39:48 PM AEST
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| great poem, sry for ur loss, keep writing~~Chrissy |
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by guiltycircles on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 05:19:04 AM AEST
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| touching...this is well written and the love from father to child is clearly expressed |
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by thedreamfairyalways on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 04:23:06 PM AEST
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| sad. but lovely. |
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by mjh0813 on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 09:53:46 AM AEST
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how to describe this? its wounderful. it touched me. its so sweet and peaceful. well i love it good job!!
peace and love
meghann |
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by specialangel8857 on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 02:02:30 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem! Great job!
God Bless,
~Ashley~ |
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by lil_noel09 on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 10:51:54 PM AEST
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| absolutely beautiful! :D |
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by 15andcounting on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 01:19:02 PM AEST
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| This is amazing and so subtle and sweet. It touches such a delicate, hard topic with the softest toucb and shows the silver lining. You drew the love out of something that can be a very frustrating sad situation, and put it on paper. Kudos! |
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 02:25:06 AM AEST
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| beautiful poem |
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by desireemiote on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:58:50 AM AEST
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Just another comment on your never ending list.
I am sorry for your loss. I am currently 5months pregnant and haven't had an ultrasound yet. I have no idea if my baby is okay. So right now I could be in your place so easily. I hope you have another baby and I hope it turns out perfectly healthy for you.
Megan(and her bun in the oven)
P.S. Don't give up hope. |
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by Remi on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 05:06:33 PM AEST
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| this is so sweet what a beauiful poem for your child |
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by razrXbldXrmnc on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 06:08:15 PM AEST
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I love it!
Very sweet....can actually picture the baby myself! |
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by marjanhr on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 02:55:51 PM AEST
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| touching.every word is pregnant with deep meaning of life.... |
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by chulysnacky on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 10:43:24 PM AEST
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wow I actually got a visual, this is a great write it's so realistic, precious, beautiful, I loved it.
ChulySnacky |
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by CaddishCut on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 04:18:23 AM AEST
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| aww this is so sweet! Great flow, great feel....I love babies!! |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 11:38:04 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem! It was beautiful and sweet. Keep up the good work! |
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by brownsugar8272 on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 12:16:33 AM AEST
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| I'm so glad you view your pregnancy as the beautiful gift it is instead of a mistake. I just know your child will be very happy to have a loving and caring parent good luck! |
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by tifrob on
Saturday, 5th July 2008 @ 09:56:40 AM AEST
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This is truly precious.
~Me~ |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th July 2008 @ 10:56:52 AM AEST
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| wow i really liked that. it's a very nice poem. |
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by Catalina on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 01:50:17 PM AEST
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| I loved it! Thankx 4 sharing! |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 03:08:45 PM AEST
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beautiful. just beautiful.
-phil |
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by warriorsb13 on
Tuesday, 20th January 2009 @ 08:37:49 PM AEST
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| wow, thats good |
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by quadira on
Sunday, 1st August 2010 @ 08:16:53 AM AEST
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beautufully written. so much warmth.
Q |
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by monkeylove on
Friday, 11th February 2011 @ 04:42:24 PM AEST
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| this was very sweet and cute |
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 14th February 2015 @ 09:09:23 PM AEST
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| Best one I've read today. I so love children. |
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