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Night Embers
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 09:49:14 AM in AEST
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Too deep inside this time
and the power of your motion
runs over me like an ocean.
Feeling you wrapped tightly
around me pressed close.
Your crimson lips loving
wrapped around me or
locked hard against mine.
Dying deep inside
as we touch and caress.
Twisted on this alter
enthralled by lust.
Comming over you
as nails tear skin
have to bite or bust.
From behind I press
hard against you.
Smell your hair of
the sweetest peaches.
Taste your sweat
and sweetest nectar.
Both screaming and
begging for more...
More...
More!!
The book of the faulty phoenix
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-01-05 09:49:14]
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Re: Night Embers
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 10:14:58 AM AEST
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Hot stuff buddy...well done ;o)
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Re: Night Embers
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 10:47:41 AM AEST
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spicy...good write
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Re: Night Embers
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by mercedes on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 11:05:10 AM AEST
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| I like. More, more!! |
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Re: Night Embers
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 01:33:10 PM AEST
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Twisted on this alter
enthralled by lust.
I loved that hell man it was all good. Loved the emotion and imagery. Can't wait to see whats next.
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Re: Night Embers
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by irshprnss on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 02:20:05 PM AEST
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Once again.....Wonderful. Very steamy, gotta catch my breath!
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Re: Night Embers
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by Kie on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 03:58:00 PM AEST
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Instant hot flash here...I forgot what I was going to say...
Tantalizing-
Kie |
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Re: Night Embers
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 04:03:03 PM AEST
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:>) Knew it was gonna be steamy from the time I heard the whistles...:>)
Hugs
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Re: Night Embers
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 04:07:00 PM AEST
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this is an awesome write.. you can feel the steam lol.. i really enjoyed reading this.. great job
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Re: Night Embers
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 06:39:21 PM AEST
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this is definitely mucho caliente... :) lol
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Re: Night Embers
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 06:59:19 PM AEST
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Whoa... keep 'em coming,that's all I have to say!! Excuse me for a minute or three.....
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Night Embers
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by Merry on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 09:06:29 PM AEST
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Still sizzling at sunrise i bet...this is a hot write!!! Well done. i'm so glad i stopped by.
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Re: Night Embers
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 02:24:09 AM AEST
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line 7th is a repitition..line 13 th is actually editable..total write is excellent and very hot.
beautifully delectable. venkat |
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Re: Night Embers
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by Jolly on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 05:17:10 PM AEST
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| Ok..let's work on a steamy poem together...I'm pretty good at those myself...read "come dance with me" or she swims alone"....I think a colaberation like this would be verrrrry verrrrry fun. You have the youth and energy hereas I have age and....ummmm experience..LOL. What do you say Cobalt....and your name emplies your hard as a rock....rotflmao...again!!!!! |
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