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~What Do You Choose?~
Contributed by
Wicked
on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 07:22:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Ever feel as if sombody is watching you
Knowing deep inside they see your every move
A look over your shoulder, a dark stranger
Is he moving faster, and coming yet closer?
He is yet familar, a certain emptiness in his eyes
Do you know him, maybe, letting out a mournful sigh
A day gone past makes your heart heave with the pain
Never thinking you would one day relive all this again
You stop, turning towards him, he hesitates, but moves forward
Taking your hand in his own, the memories, he was once yours
You feel the room start to spin, he holds you now so close
New beginnings? new heartaches? soon see....what do you choose
Copyright ©
Wicked
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2004-01-04 19:22:11]
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Re: ~What Do You Choose?~
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by ArdRi79 on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 01:20:15 AM AEST
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this is interesting the way the person begins as a stalker then turns into a lover...?
I read it a few times, well written |
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Re: ~What Do You Choose?~
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by Kie on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 10:59:12 AM AEST
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Deep and mysterious. Very interesting to read. I don't know that I could choose but I sure enjoyed your poem.
Kie |
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Re: ~What Do You Choose?~
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 11:03:26 AM AEST
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| I liked this... It had some twisting there but I liked it... It has an oddness to it though.... I don't know what to make of it. |
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