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Time will tell

Contributed by desertwispers on Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 04:29:15 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Another year has come and gone
a chapter to be put to a close
2003 a brief piece of history
what comes next one wont know.

Will this year bring to many love and cheer
or will it just carry over from the past year?
Are there new plans in the mix
to improve things overall?

Time will tell as the minutes tick
and soon hours turn to days
will this be the best year ever
are you going to be happy with decissions made.

Do es your plans include helping
everyone you can to make this
world a better place for every child
woman creature and man?

Or do these plans just revolve around
only you not caring about another
just about what it is that you do?
Ahh yes my friends the message may be clear

Time will tell time will tell....

Copyright © desertwispers ... [ 2004-01-04 16:29:15]
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Re: Time will tell (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 06:02:01 PM AEST
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This one reminds me of "The Road Not Taken" by Robert Frost. It's got that air to it..... "where's the future going to take me" thing going on =) But I'll have to make a comment on the first two lines of the second stanza-- the last year wasn't bad I don't think. I'm thinking that yes, there were many bad things that came about this past year, but also many good things came about..... Just something I had to say =)

Nice write
God bless,
Ellen
; )

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