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All In Vain
Contributed by
sicknivesevered
on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 11:30:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Its all over, you hurt us both - It was inevitable
Did you stay up all night? The pain, was it unbearable?
I should be crying, I should be sadder - Yet I'm not
I'm finding it easy to kill the memories and let them rot
Cause inside there's nothing, I feel so hollow
There's no feeling forcing me to follow
Instead I can focus on the good it means to me
I can lust after all my urges for the obscene
To torment is to die - The souls seperate
Look me in the eye - The love dissipates
The best thing that I can think of though
Is the exit of your world - Sweet god I know
That this is something I've been praying for
Cause its so screwed up, straight down to the core
I don't have to listen to your problems and lend sympathy
Dwell in your pain alone, and miss the comfort of me
Maybe your retarded friends can help you out
They're emotionally insecure like you, without a doubt
To torment is to die - The souls seperate
Look me in the eye - The love dissipates
GOD, I WAS SO PATIENT - All in vain
TRY TO FIND ANOTHER LIKE ME; no one's the same
I WORKED SO HARD - All in vain
MY SAINT-LIKE LOVE IS GONE AND YOUR the only one to blame
Try to grow up and restructure your face
So your body can find the mindset it misplaced
You were holding me back as I was pushing you along
Everything revolved around you, HELL! EVEN THIS SONG
WE DID EVERYTHING YOU WANTED TO DO
DIDN'T MATTER WHAT IT WAS, I DID IT FOR YOU
YOU PROMISED ME YOU'D DO WHAT I WANT NEXT TIME
THOUGH WERE'RE SEPERATED, I'M STILL HOLDING YOU IN THE BIND
BUT, I'M SURE YOU DON'T SEE IT THE SAME, YOU'RE
GOING TO BREAK ANOTHER PROMISE AND LEAVE IT OUT IN THE RAIN
To torment is to die - The souls seperate
Look me in the eye - The love dissipates
GOD, I WAS SO PATIENT - All in vain
TRY TO FIND ANOTHER LIKE ME; no one's the same
I WORKED SO HARD - All in vain
MY SAINT-LIKE LOVE IS GONE AND YOUR the only one to blame
So I take my leave of Jenni-world
In search of other easier girls
I wave goodbye to you
Hey!
Thanks for everything and
ABSOLUTELY NOTHING, too
Copyright ©
sicknivesevered
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2004-01-04 11:30:45]
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Re: All In Vain
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by irshprnss on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 12:52:50 PM AEST
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As I read through this poem I didn't want to stop. I loved the way it flowed and the verse...
GOD, I WAS SO PATIENT - All in vain
TRY TO FIND ANOTHER LIKE ME; no one's the same
I WORKED SO HARD - All in vain
MY SAINT-LIKE LOVE IS GONE AND YOUR the only one to blame
It would make a great rock song (I think anyways) Great Write!!
Diana
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Re: All In Vain
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 08:17:37 PM AEST
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I agree with Diana about the song thing. This is awesome! I could almost hear it playing in my head. Awesome, awesome write!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: All In Vain
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by Jacquelynne on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 10:40:54 PM AEST
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you cannot sit there and say all this stuff, bc when you do you come off as a bastard and that is something you are not. if you had asked me to stay, believe me, I would have. i wanted to keep my promises, and i was going to, even after I broke up with you. But you hurt me so badly when you stared trying to say i couldn't hang out with Nathan of Brian. you just hurt me, so here: I LOVED YOU SO *****IN MUCH, BUT YOU WERE SO GODDAMNED HORNY ALL THE TIME, YOU COULDN'T SEE MY SUFFERING THROUGH YOUR FAT UNSATISFIED DICK!!!!!!!!
I still love you, even now. |
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