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Jotted down words
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 08:13:06 AM in AEST
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These words that I write are meant to be said
To live is to fight - We'd be better off dead
No one is polite - We are f---ed in the head
No one has the right or the above you could have read
If life is a game - wich of us will lose
Sure we're all same-So can the loser choose
Take one with some fame-He can not refuse
Make him have no name-I bet he argues
The richer you are- the better you'll be
But if your a star- you'll never be free
Drive a nice car- for others to see
I'll look from afar- your no better than me
The poorer I am- the worse come the end
Can't fall for a scam- with no money to spend
Im roming the land- to look for a freind
I guess I've been scammed- theres none in the end
For richer for poorer till death do us part
I'm not the one who asked this to start
To have and to hold through better or worse
I HATE YOU GOD I HAVE NO REMORSE
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
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2004-01-04 08:13:06]
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Re: Jotted down words
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 09:00:40 AM AEST
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| i like i like so very true you made us all relize the compications that life is |
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Re: Jotted down words
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 11:29:04 AM AEST
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| Very good, i liked this one |
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Re: Jotted down words
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 09:09:10 PM AEST
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I thought the rhyme scheme in this was rad and overall it was written very well... except for the last line that ruined it I'm sorry to say.
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