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angry
Contributed by
silent-cry
on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 07:41:38 AM in AEST
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trying hard not to complain
so damn calm but barely sane
he's waiting...he's been waiting for years
no tears of sadness,but neither of joy
just eager to kill and to destroy
but he's keeping it all inside
he's been waiting for so long,
it has become easy to hide...
no rush of blood to the head
just a freezing sensation instead
cold blood generated by a colder heart
madness,anger,are his best friends
only death will tear them apart...
dark thoughts of suicide are his key to paradise
but he's ll never be able to close his eyes
if he doesn't take his revenge first,
if he doesn't completly satisfy his thirst
for blood...for her purple blood...
and he's still waiting...he's been waiting for years...
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silent-cry
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2004-01-04 07:41:38]
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Re: angry
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 09:08:34 AM AEST
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| chillingly well written.... |
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Re: angry
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 02:20:15 PM AEST
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damn good poem..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: angry
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 09:06:31 PM AEST
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I've been there before... this was very good I especially enjoyed the haunting, mildly psychotic undertone.
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