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My Withered Rose *
Contributed by
Chanti
on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 04:55:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I think of you,
a withering rose,
so beautiful it seems,
almost as if it was made to be like that,
weak and dying,
But you, your so much more complicated,
you look in the mirror and see a shattered image,
sometimes no image at all,
Holding off your pain with anything that will make you forget,
taking whatever you can in hopes it will end your life.
Then theres me...
just watching,
always painting back your portrait,
fitting your shattered reflection together,
and as always you thank me,
and i wipe my tears away,
along with the fear that i might never get to talk you out of this dark hole again,
and again *
Copyright ©
Chanti
... [
2004-01-04 04:55:26]
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Re: My Withered Rose *
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by emystar on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 05:00:55 AM AEST
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yes, it shows.
good work.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: My Withered Rose *
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by gery_giggles on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 11:09:13 AM AEST
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this is really good.....it brought tears to my eyes.......keep up the good work!
luv always |
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Re: My Withered Rose *
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 04:21:26 PM AEST
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beautiful.... thank u... i know ppl like that... i love them, i see them, but i cant always reach them!!
luv,
myrts |
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Re: My Withered Rose *
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 09:14:40 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece of work.
- blueheart |
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Re: My Withered Rose *
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 01:55:48 PM AEST
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wow this was so sad yet beautiful. I can relate to the last line so much with a friend who is going through some *****. Good poem there.
Bobo (Joel) |
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