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Should I Go?
Contributed by
BRAT
on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 10:47:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If I died, would you even know?
Just one little bullet, one single blow.
What am I to you, except pain.
If I were dead, you would probably gain.
Am I the only one who feels this way?
Should I go on to see another day?
I'm confused, my life's a mess.
With death, comes no stress.
Would anyone even cry?
I bet all eyes would stay dry.
Sometimes I wish I could end it-
If death was meant for me...
I wish God would send it to me!
Copyright ©
BRAT
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2004-01-03 22:47:12]
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Re: Should I Go?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 12:04:12 PM AEST
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hey! I loove this poem! I've seen it at different sites. I can relate to it very well. Keep up the great work. And there is someone who does care if you're gone!
luv, KareBear age: 16 2004 |
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Re: Should I Go?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 11:24:09 PM AEST
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| You stole my poem stupid, next time before u take someones poem...make sure they arent on the site already-REDRUM33 |
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