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Another Puppet for Father TIme

Contributed by karoody on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 06:19:23 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Time races by
And my smile fades
As another year closes
Reminding me of wasted days
Filled with empty plans and promises
"it will be better tomorrow
things will change
i'll get myself out of this"
But everyday ends the same
And I'm still here
Lost somewhere between dream and reality
My mind engulfed by a haze
Feeling like I'm hydro-planing through life
With no way to gain control
Of my direction or anything else
Or maybe I am in a coma
With no grasp on time
No true memories-
Just a series of dreams
Where I try to take a hold on Father Time
But he always eludes me
So I just sit here
Waiting for him to show me my role






Copyright © karoody ... [ 2004-01-03 18:19:23]
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Re: Another Puppet for Father TIme (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 09:24:30 PM AEST
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The concept here is very relevant. I love it..
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Another Puppet for Father TIme (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 03:20:19 AM AEST
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I agree with Jenni and I can relate to this mucho. A very beautiful poem.

Bobo (joel)


Re: Another Puppet for Father TIme (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 12:56:07 AM AEST
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It is a great write..well expressed on the change of time between dream and reality.
amazing..venkat
v


Re: Another Puppet for Father TIme (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 10:48:25 PM AEST
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i love time poetry and this is great, hang tough in there it does get easier, i think, lol, love you and a big hug, nessa


Re: Another Puppet for Father TIme (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 11:30:56 AM AEST
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Ah, so short but so much said here. The pitfalls of life and where do we go from here? Questions, choices, decisions, and goals. A sense of being lost. You do really good expressing your feelings and doubts.

I especially love this line:

Feeling like I'm hydro-planing through life
With no way to gain control


Too cool.

*grabs a hold of Father Time & shakes him about*

You ready to give her some answers now???!!!



Re: Another Puppet for Father TIme (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 11:35:33 AM AEST
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P.S. I forgot to say I love the title.




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