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drop
Contributed by
Suz
on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 02:49:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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drop
drop the marbles
let
let them roll
watch
watch them going away
away
away
each
with its own will
spread
spreading farther
roll
rolling even faster
more
more than one way
out
out and yonder
gone
gone o'er the hill
feel
feel the beauty
watch
watch them go
Copyright ©
Suz
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2004-01-03 14:49:55]
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Re: drop
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 03:27:06 PM AEST
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| It hath rythum! I enjoyed this very much, especially the word placement. I appreciate this very much. |
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Re: drop
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 04:27:15 PM AEST
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Yes..this was well done....
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Re: drop
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by Kie on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 06:27:35 PM AEST
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After reading this a couple of times I was still unsure what it was about. I did think you did a wonderful job with your word placement and flow.
Kie |
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