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End in Decay
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
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Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 10:04:58 AM in AEST
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We can't change the way it is
Its just the way it goes
Theres nothing here to fix
Its just already broke
Everything He gives
Will go down in smoke
Every life is His
The reasons to revoke
Our life is just a game
You don't really need a name
We are really all the same
And Jesus Christ's the one to blame
But we don't really need to play
Yes there are rules but why obey
When we can choose how long we stay
Because in the end we just decay
This life is just a joke
We are drowning in our *****
So now a finger I poke
Towards our Gods dismiss
With the cold hand You choke
Out our intelligence
Leading us to smoke
And decay in dress
This life is full of hate
Where is all the love
People discriminate
The other colors get shoved
One Man holds fate
To the people getting roughed
And still they don't rate
I HAVE HAD ENOUGH
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
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2004-01-03 10:04:58]
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Re: End in Decay
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by mercedes on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 10:28:14 AM AEST
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| I would guess you will offend many out there who read this, but i find it refreshing to hear others opinions. Besides, everyone is intitled to their own opinions and feelings. Like you say, why play their game? |
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Re: End in Decay
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by Aika on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 11:53:16 AM AEST
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Hello, interesting opinon,
but believe in what your heart wants
change your life, change the others
by showing your love..
you start with yourself and do not end this chain, this is only way how we can be helped..
My own life philosophy is: Life is mirror, all you do, all you say, wish or pray, you get back - only do not close your eyes so that you can see how you got it and gave.. aika:-) |
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Re: End in Decay
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by Kie on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 06:09:42 PM AEST
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I found your poem interesting. You show the reader your perspective on life. Thanks for sharing.
Kie |
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Re: End in Decay
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 06:05:26 AM AEST
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| its very descriptive of how people feel so many times in their life when they feel they've fallen through so many cracks and start to question God. and if you're reading this and you say youve never questioned Him, you're a liar, thus a sinner and you're going to the eternal pit of doom. I know how you feel suicidal. |
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Re: End in Decay
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 01:03:53 PM AEST
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| This was very good and I liked it. The correct word used though was showing she didn't say sharing. She never said you where prejudiced unless I missed something. None of us would probably ever get every meaning behind anyones poem ever without it being explained. So don't worry about it. Just write on. Great work. I love the darkness about it and I will see you in hell. |
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