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A Letter You'll Never Receive
Contributed by
karoody
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Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 03:08:03 AM in AEST
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I truely love you
Probably too much
I think of you daily
Miss you horribly
I hate you so much
You hurt me in so many ways
I don't want you around
Don't want to see your face
I'm trapped between reality and memory
In a place where you haunt my soul
Remembering days you made me smile
Comforted me
All the tears I've cried
As you broke my heart
Left me lonely
In spite of the pain you made me endure
I sit here wondering where I went wrong
Why it got to the point I had to leave
The day we met, my soul was aching
You promised me I would no longer hurt
Just one more promise you couldn't keep
Still I stood beside you
But it wasn't enough
So I walked away
Vowing to never retrun
I can't lie and say that I am happy now
Truth be told, I have been very lost ever since
Copyright ©
karoody
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2004-01-03 03:08:03]
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Re: A Letter You'll Never Receive
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 04:05:12 AM AEST
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Love does not analyse the person on whom we bestow it. It does not question or doubt..
Even in the more trustworthy society of yesteryear and with some experience and maturity, we stood no better than a 50/50 chance of a successful relationship.
Today the chances of success are much much lower.
I describe my own experiences way back in the forties and fifties (in my poem "He's not the only one") They are even more relavent today.
Your poem is so very well written it took me right back to those days. Brought back ghosts from the past (another poem "The way we were")
You are so right......people can't keep promises anymore.
bob
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Re: A Letter You'll Never Receive
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by venkat on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 04:59:48 AM AEST
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Awww..its a beautiful write.all your feelings are well painted with a brush of your emotion
hugs and love my dear girrl :o)
your friend...venkat |
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Re: A Letter You'll Never Receive
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 06:11:51 AM AEST
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| You've ripped the words right from my heart ... I know exactly how you feel ...and am so very sorry ... I wish I could help in some small way, but I know nothing can mend the pain of lost love ... wonderful write ... Jan |
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Re: A Letter You'll Never Receive
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 11:39:53 AM AEST
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Awwww Kara....good to see you back.... evn with a sad write like this... let's talk someday soon..ok
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: A Letter You'll Never Receive
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by Kie on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 01:05:15 PM AEST
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This poem really got to me. So much hurt and pain and remembering what it is like.
Loved your poem.
Kie |
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Re: A Letter You'll Never Receive
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by shelby on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 01:08:02 PM AEST
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so emotional and sad touching write
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Re: A Letter You'll Never Receive
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 12:05:57 PM AEST
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| Excellent write. Better to make amends today while you still may than to wait and have it be too late. I know too many who think there is always tomorrow and it usually comes back and get them. Great write though. I enjoyed it and it seemed as was said to have been ripped from your heart. Full emotion behind this one. Great. |
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Re: A Letter You'll Never Receive
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 11:08:24 PM AEST
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| dearest kara, you never know when you meet love what it will do to your heart, soul, and mind, excellent expression here, my heart goes out to you with much love sent your way all the time, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A Letter You'll Never Receive
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 11:19:22 AM AEST
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Wow, I can soooo relate to this. Bit of a tear jerker, Karabear.
You have captured the essence of love, pain, hurt, broken promises, and that all encompassing feeling of we don't wanna love that person but dammit we do anyway. But hey, you didn't send the letter. That shows your strength that I keep talking about.
Good job!!!
*huge hug*
Tim
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