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unfinished work
Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
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Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 01:04:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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new to the game
he's a seasoned vet
started the trend
now collecting dust
left in back allys cursing the world
caught up in his own show
new age frankenstien with a heart of stone
more lonely nights screaming at memories
hell have been shot nine time before the nights out
find him wallowing in the gutter
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TaintedOptomist
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2004-01-03 01:04:41]
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Re: unfinished work
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:23:41 PM AEST
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| i like it :) short and sweet. |
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Re: unfinished work
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by TaintedOptomist on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 05:05:20 PM AEST
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| I'm not really sure where this came from but it's a breakthrough for me one of the few things i've been able to write that had nothing to do with me or any one i know. |
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Re: unfinished work
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by dolly_dagger on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 08:18:54 AM AEST
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| that's what i've been trying to do. it never works though. well done lol! i shall keep trying. i think i'm getting closer... |
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Re: unfinished work
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 06:18:07 PM AEST
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| very interesting, i like it :) |
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Re: unfinished work
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by pooper on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 08:58:36 AM AEST
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Memories and the degeneration of heroes.
Keep it up. |
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Re: unfinished work
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by pooper on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2010 @ 08:58:56 AM AEST
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Memories and the degeneration of heroes.
Keep it up. |
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