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U can change my world (woman)
Contributed by
cant-skate
on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 04:15:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Woman you can change my world
I'm chained to the fears
Inside these walls
The silence talks loud
'bout the things I recall
Through the bricks in the window
I scream at the world
But when no one is listening
It's hard to be heard
Woman there'll be no return
I see shadows
Coming through the walls
I hear voices
But no one's talking at all
I can feel the madness
Crawling up my spine
Reachin' out
To grab your mind
You've never seen me
But I know you so well
And before it kills me
I gotta break the spell
The deeper we touch
The higher we'll go
The time has come
To heal my soul
Woman you can change my world
Do you remember all those fears?
They won't leave me alone
Do you remember all those tears?
I pretend to be strong
Do you remember all the pain?
I'm getting tired of the game
I cannot live I cannot die
I wanna know who the hell am I
Woman I'm gonna change your world
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cant-skate
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2004-01-02 16:15:22]
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Re: U can change my world (woman)
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by loopylou on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 04:41:03 PM AEST
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| awww very sweet i like the way its written not to mushy well done! |
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Re: U can change my world (woman)
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by emystar on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 04:53:18 PM AEST
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Very artistic writing!
peace, joy, luv, two thumbs up,
emy |
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Re: U can change my world (woman)
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by Kie on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 11:10:06 PM AEST
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Witty, upbeat, introspective and I thought the ending was fantastic!
"Woman I'm gonna change your world"
Perfect ending!
Kie
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