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LIFE
Contributed by
Cristi
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Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 03:53:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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feeling lost, no where to run.
my heart feels broken
There's no more shine in the sun
I want to get away
just pack up in drive
I feel so dead and useless
but i know im alive
i sit in my room
all alone on my bed
with thoughts of the life I want
swirling around in my head
i dream of what i could change
i feel so deranged,
but in the end, were all the same.
Copyright ©
Cristi
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2004-01-02 15:53:25]
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Re: LIFE
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 03:27:34 AM AEST
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Useless? Nah, not with the writing talent you've got...
Keep writing, and take care.
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Re: LIFE
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by jc_92024 on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:30:13 PM AEST
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Hey scristi your not useles i love ya well write more k i want to read more see ya later
Blankas yeah woof woof yeah yeah |
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Re: LIFE
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by jc_92024 on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:30:47 PM AEST
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Hey cristi your not useles i love ya well write more k i want to read more see ya later
Blankas yeah woof woof yeah yeah |
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