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Part of life
Contributed by
jackee_line
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Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 09:33:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Biting nails
Sitting at the edge of my seat
Fear takes hold.
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jackee_line
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2004-01-02 09:33:50]
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Re: Part of life
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 02:15:10 PM AEST
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This is lovely, but a true haiku has 5 syllables in the first line, (not 3), 7(not 8) in the second, and 5 again in the third. But you have the general idea... Go for it!!
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Re: Part of life
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by Dawny on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 09:52:30 PM AEST
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I really like this, it reminds me of a quote I really like "action cures fear"
Well done....Dawny |
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Re: Part of life
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by afterdark on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 03:24:24 PM AEST
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| i liked this one alot..good read. |
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