|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The Jasmine Moon
Contributed by
Blaze
on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 09:16:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
|
Stepping onto a mound of sand with unclothed feet
As blades of emerald grass sweep across them
The soothing, frosty winds shower me with pebbles
I cast my eyes upon the night’s lambent pearl
The sky stretches with shards of sapphire
Echoing the moon’s lustrous aura
The water’s lathery waves bask in its glory
While aspiring doves encircle the stars
As I rinse my feet in the red ocean wine
Still staring at the full jasmine moon
The sky and waters mirror my star-crossed soul
Oblivious mind and spirit bleed
The blood-red sea embraces my soul
As sapphire shards rain down
The roaring tide subsides and my figure ebbs
Though the trivial mind wanders free
Copyright ©
Blaze
... [
2004-01-02 09:16:38]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Jasmine Moon
(User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 05:21:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Hmmm I liked your description. Really great poem, the kind of poem that make you want to go out during the night and watch nature. |
|
|
Re: The Jasmine Moon
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:32:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| There are a few good things to do when experiencing insomnia. This was one of them, my friend! |
|
|
Re: The Jasmine Moon
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on
Friday, 9th January 2004 @ 10:16:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A lovely poem, Blaze. Your vocabulary is much greater than mine. I didn't understand all of it.
Does blood-red sea .... and shards rain down
have something about the atmosphere in a land affected by war? A new friend, Bizzy |
|
|
Re: The Jasmine Moon
(User Rating: 1 )
by Blaze on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:27:14 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Bizzy, yes, I guess you could say that it refers to a war -- more like an internal conflict. |
|
|
Re: The Jasmine Moon
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:29:16 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hey you,
thanx for yet another comment
Insomnia is a god send to me
because i have terrible nightmares
now im on sleeping pills im stuck in the dream
this poem was great
something i'd like to dream of.
till next time,
emz |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
