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My Paradise
Contributed by
Schnikes13
on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 11:51:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Feeling so dejected
So crushed
And lonely
There’s no escape for me
I cry from sunrise to sunrise
There’s no peace,
No second of bliss
There’s no escape for me
Nobody understands
So they reject me
And all my thoughts
Taking my dreams,
Throwing them into oblivion
Leaving me without warmth
I keep to myself
Because only I comprehend
The words running through my head
The feelings running through my veins
The dreams through my entire being
I hoped to find an escape
Some paradise to call my own,
A heavenly person,
Who knows what I’m going through
Yes, I have found that paradise
But it can never be mine
Copyright ©
Schnikes13
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2004-01-01 23:51:12]
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Re: My Paradise
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by harshreality on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 11:53:39 PM AEST
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| I completely relate and it sucks. This was very good. I wish you all the best. |
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Re: My Paradise
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 11:57:48 PM AEST
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Good write....
Jenni |
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Re: My Paradise
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by redwest802 on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 06:02:04 AM AEST
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i found this to be an interesting read.
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