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7
Contributed by
ethrill
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Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 09:41:58 PM in AEST
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I can't sleep nary a wink
Yet these eyes refuse to open
Another day wandering without purpose
24 more hours obsessing about you
Yet you don't have the slightest clue
Of how I truly feel.
Have the audacity to
Conduct yourself graciously
I resent your ability to
Rest comfortably at night
My sight is dim
Your view of clarity
By the time you return
A desperate phone call
I'll be the oldest father alive
Able to survive those hallowed
Wars with despair
Enveloped with one regret
I failed to turn your head
Not from disgust
But from insatiable wonder.
Copyright ©
ethrill
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2004-01-01 21:41:58]
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Re: 7
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 10:36:14 PM AEST
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Very enchanting.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: 7
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by alecfernadez on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 04:50:10 AM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: 7
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 05:34:01 PM AEST
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| Cool write even though I don't think I fully got it. |
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