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lovely

Contributed by Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 08:22:32 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

...it was love..one that shouldnt of sparked, but did...it was pure passion, with no boundaries or rules...
i knew it would never burn out for me..but it was a flame he never wanted or touched...
to not care..thats what killed me..
hardened my heart, my mind...
i will leave him and live on with full regret forever..knowing he never loved me back.
passion turned down, ecstasy lost
..longing....he left me........
so i tried to leave this world, because i couldnt wake up from all this mess of love.
to have seen his soul was to see myself..
a mirror image i had fancied, but wanted to hide from...
to take my life...a release...he never loved me.
..so why should i keep him?
why try to survive on false liking..when my heart craves love?
like i once said...for me to survive...
i always needed someone.....
to love, to admire...but never touch...just out of my reach, yet still so close to me.
needed to make me feel again..feel alive..
he was my only someone...but he never
loved me back...
---juliet takes her life to offer romeo his
own again..free from her pain..-----
couldnt bear to see you go...so i had to leave too...although i chose a different road...
towards the reaper's door...
as the raven sang on, alone...
all i have to do is knock..

Copyright © Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre ... [ 2004-01-01 20:22:32]
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Re: lovely (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 05:31:56 PM AEST
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I liked this. It was a very interesting write. Pretty good though.

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