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Fragile
Contributed by
estelle_toh
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Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 08:12:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Maybe I thought,
Write your name on paper,
Rather than carve it on my heart.
Fragile the paper may be,
But at least it won't break my heart.
Second thoughts,
Changed my mind,
Because,
Even when I die,
I want to die with you in my heart.
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estelle_toh
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2004-01-01 20:12:29]
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Re: Fragile
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by carebear on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 08:20:54 PM AEST
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Hello
I really enjoyed reading this poem it was really something else I can some how relate to it I guess...keep writen.
*CareBear*
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Re: Fragile
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 10:51:10 PM AEST
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Very sweet.
peace, joy,
emy |
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Re: Fragile
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by blueheart on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 12:08:56 AM AEST
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| Wow, that touched me more than i thought it would. Great write. :) |
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Re: Fragile
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 12:13:04 AM AEST
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Awww..this is sweet...
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Re: Fragile
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by Kie on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 11:00:42 PM AEST
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An all around nice poem to read. Although short it said so many things.
"Write your name on paper,
Rather than carve it on my heart"
Wow did I like those two lines.
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Re: Fragile
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by Kie on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 06:24:11 PM AEST
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I just had to read this again and in doing so, comment again. Your poem hit me in the vicinity of my heart and continues to do so every time I read it.
Kie |
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