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visions
Contributed by
Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre
on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 08:10:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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child tantrums rewarded with candies
fits of emotion to be
indulged
ignored
playing crochet with popguns...running wild
alice in wonderland in my own backyard
pleading to man-made statues for fortune and forgiveness
sins retributed, habit to us all.....
shining diamonds in a sand cup
fountains of crimson
-child laughter unending-
reflective pools of the past
razor necklaces galore...calling for your spirit
your soul.....constantly beckoning
insomniac nights and days of daydreamings
...lust for fun?...
paranoia-they are better than me
reaper, smiling, blind as love
deamons surround a brass throne
drenched in sacrifices
...bloody roses.....
-dont look!-
-dont touch!-
-dont love-
......or want..............e n v y.......-
murder and enjoyous tortures
death for dire emotion, yet dead to the touch
falling in love to make
an empty heart get broken...make it feel
memories through the mirror
crystal dagger of the truth
self destruction
prison of wildflowers
drugged-up model playing with makeup
-broken spirit, broken mirror-
society blinded but watching TV....
choked to death to be reborn a killer
splinters in the wooden jewelry stores
weddings of tattered linen
and promises of dust
people crying as a child skips through the
funeral crowd....laughing merrily..
are you frightened yet?...
she will never leave me...
a tiny fae with her heart in turmoil...
...she weeps for me always...
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2004-01-01 20:10:49]
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Re: visions
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by alecfernadez on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 04:52:57 AM AEST
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Re: visions
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 06:57:11 AM AEST
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Give me a second to pick myself up off the floor. This is deep, deep writing, I think I could follow where you meant to go with this. Very impressive.
Truly,
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Re: visions
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 01:25:24 PM AEST
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| I absolutely loved this. I know I will be rereading it shortly. That one really sucked me into it. Deeply and truly awesome. |
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Re: visions
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by Kie on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 06:21:53 PM AEST
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Very well written. I confess I have no idea where it was going but it was so great to read I just kept on reading. Really deep..
Kie |
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