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Only Wish
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 05:35:31 PM in AEST
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Where is my angel?
It seems she's gone away
Left me in a game I cannot play
There's nothing I can do
I can't see past your face
And I feel like I'm falling from grace
Where is she now?
I need a little guidance
And someone who understands
I don't know how
I wound up at your mercy
None of this is what I planned
I look around me
How'd I get so alone?
I remember when your heart still shone
It shouldn't feel this way
I never thought it would
And if I let go it could be good
Where did she go?
Everything's so confusing
And I feel like I'm losing
I wish I'd known
I put my heart on the line
When I left them all behind
I only want someone to hold me
I only need somebody who comprehends
I only hope somebody feels the way I do
I only want this pain to leave me
I only need someone to talk to, just a friend
I only wish that somebody was you
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Re: Only Wish
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 06:51:33 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful.. and so sad.. i hope your angel realises soon how lucky she is to have a friend like you! and i hope you're okay too..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Only Wish
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by Kie on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 07:43:55 PM AEST
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The strings to my heart were tugged hard while reading this. Incredibly sad, filled with emotion and absolutely beautiful.
Kie |
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Re: Only Wish
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 08:14:55 PM AEST
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| This sounds all too familiar.... sad but good writing Moonlit... |
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Re: Only Wish
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 12:18:09 AM AEST
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Well said, Moonlit.... all too familiar to me too....but many moons ago....
Hugs and best wishes for a great 2004..
Jenni |
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Re: Only Wish
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by blueheart on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 12:19:55 AM AEST
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| Awfully sad but well written. |
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Re: Only Wish
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 10:33:51 AM AEST
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Such power and show of emotions. Incredibly good write.
'There's nothing I can do
I can't see past your face
And I feel like I'm falling from grace'
Those lines are deeply awesome. |
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Re: Only Wish
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by Cristi on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 03:54:35 PM AEST
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| Thats great, i think you have great potential |
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Re: Only Wish
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by StarBeneathTheStairs on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 05:05:52 AM AEST
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| Very touching, well written, loved it :) |
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Re: Only Wish
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 01:46:06 AM AEST
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Well written Moonlit,your last verse stated every emotion even if it wasn't written.Nicely done,
PumpkinPie |
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