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Pain Unseen
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
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Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 01:40:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Look into these eyes that watch the knife
To cut the wrists and end the life
Living each day with a disorder
Sometimes wishing to be immortal
My darkest writings are just mere words
That are kept inside from screams not heard
Reoccured with tears that are forever hidden
Because of the past that's now forbidden
My darkest days are when sorrows show
Self esteem that has dropped so low
You'll never see me shed a tear
Hidden from you is every fear
Look in these eyes that shine like glass
That wish so much to forget the past
These eyes that wish for memories to be erased
To just runaway to a hidden place
I wish to forget the things making me sad
And just forget all the bad times I've had
I wish these tears wouldn't roll down
I can hear them shatter as they hit the ground.
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CuttersAngel
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2004-01-01 13:40:18]
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Re: Pain Unseen
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 01:52:00 PM AEST
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Wow...this is so sad..but s well done..
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Re: Pain Unseen
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by shelby on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 02:52:15 PM AEST
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this is very sad. Its hard to rid oneself of hidden darkness and past pain but the more you work on making yourself happy it gets easier.I hope you find the peace and happiness your looking for.
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Re: Pain Unseen
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 06:14:44 PM AEST
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Aww that's so sad... the pain of hiding yourself from the world. I relate to this so well, it just about made me wanna cry. Well done!
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Re: Pain Unseen
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 11:25:53 PM AEST
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I can relate to this a lot and it cuts me deep. Wow... I'm at a loss for words at the moment.
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