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Sigh Away
Contributed by
ravenrain
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Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 12:05:37 PM in AEST
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Sigh away, smile, twirl, and then bow...
This release in not far, this burden,
Less foul.
The farther I take it, the closer I make it,
No chaos will reign, if the fire is lit.
Shy away, blinded, shield and then find,
A triumph that strengthens this weakness
Inside.
So fervent and pressing to achieve a great dream,
Of glory and fame, like a mid night moonbeam.
Copyright ©
ravenrain
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2004-01-01 12:05:37]
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Re: Sigh Away
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by Kirby on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 10:17:28 PM AEST
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| It took me awhile to get this poem but after i did I liked it! Now I will go reead and comment on more of ur poems! Love:::Kirby |
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Re: Sigh Away
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 09:22:34 PM AEST
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| great rhyme scheme! |
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