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A Perfect Day to Die

Contributed by eternal_sorrows on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 06:03:21 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



As tears are rolling down my face
this life I know, a disgrace
and as again I start to cry
this is a perfect day to die.
As I look across my yard
knowing life is so ever hard
wondering how it got to be
this dying soul I call me.
And as I look up to the sky
this is a perfect day to die.
The trees tell stories of my yesteryears
of love and life and all my fears
and silence is the only sound
as darkness lingers all around.
Silently I break down to cry
this is a perfect day to die.




Copyright © eternal_sorrows ... [ 2004-01-01 06:03:21]
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Re: A Perfect Day to Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 06:24:46 AM AEST
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The worst part is that the sun never seems to set on this day, does it? Great write, i'd be happy to join you.

Truly,
-V.S.


Re: A Perfect Day to Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 06:26:47 AM AEST
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This is brilliant, truly inspirational and hits close to home...

i love the way this is written and the words used, i could say cheer up and have a happy new year but somehow i know those words wont help any so all i can say is that if you ever want to talk then i'm here...

Take Care
Love 'n Hugs
- Becca


Re: A Perfect Day to Die (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 07:20:15 AM AEST
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A perfect poem for the perfect day, well written the way you worded this grabbed me


Re: A Perfect Day to Die (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 09:21:08 AM AEST
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You took the words right out of my mouth, this was both easy and hard to read.Well done,it can only get better!


Re: A Perfect Day to Die (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 10:43:39 AM AEST
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Really good poem.


Re: A Perfect Day to Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 04:53:27 PM AEST
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great poem...somethin about this one that I really like! awesome job...=)


Re: A Perfect Day to Die (User Rating: 1 )
by JjournalitK on Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 09:46:25 PM AEST
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your poem was written really well.
the repetition was put in well, for example. i know how you feel...well...'xept for the perfect day thing...=/
when you're down, the only way to go is up, so try to not despair! and keep writing!


Re: A Perfect Day to Die (User Rating: 1 )
by CrucifiedAndLeft2Die on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 01:47:54 PM AEST
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*claps* amazing write




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