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FALLEN ANGELS
Contributed by
redwest802
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Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 04:54:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When Angels fall from grace,
They lose their wings of flight.
Cast of into the darkness
Condemned into the night.
Bound to walk upon the earth,
Never to feel love again.
To suffer the punishment and wrath of the lord,
For committing their mortal sin.
If you find one, sad and alone,
Just remember who they are.
They probably committed their mortal sin,
To help you get this far.
So take them home and give them care,
Try to help them with their needs.
And maybe if you're lucky at the end of you life,
You will be rewarded for your good deed.
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2004-01-01 04:54:28]
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Re: FALLEN ANGELS
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by venkat on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 05:22:40 AM AEST
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| A very nice advice. venkat |
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Re: FALLEN ANGELS
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by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 07:32:33 AM AEST
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| A good poem with a good message and Good Imagery we could all show a little more compassion it might come back to us |
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Re: FALLEN ANGELS
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by allforyou on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:10:07 PM AEST
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What a poem. I absolutely love it.
"If you find one, sad and alone,
Just remember who they are.
They probably committed their mortal sin,
To help you get this far."
This is my favorite stanza. Especially the last 2 lines. It's so amazing. Keep writing. Looking forward to reading all you've posted on this site.
--Kara |
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Re: FALLEN ANGELS
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by AshRayne on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 07:04:33 PM AEST
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your writing is so interesting, and its nice to read a part of someone's soul, especially when it is so well writen. looking forward to more from you,
exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection
~Ash |
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