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You Hold My Heart
Contributed by
hope
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Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 08:02:22 PM in AEST
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It is you who holds my heart
You who knows my pain
I rest in the palm of your hand
You catch every tear that falls from my face
You ve breathed hope in to me
Eternal hope of something more
For that is where I long to be
You whisper my name and carry me through
In the tough times you hold me in your right hand
Protecting me from all that is cruel
Soon I will see your face
It is what gets me through each day
My heart will finally rest
For I will be home at last
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2003-12-31 20:02:22]
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Re: You Hold My Heart
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 01:58:48 AM AEST
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Very well said
awesomely beautifull.
Happiest new year ever,
emy |
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Re: You Hold My Heart
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by alixia12 on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 06:15:10 AM AEST
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| Yes i would like to make a staement on your poem You Hold My Heart.Its good and all that you put so much trust in the hands of the one it seems you love. but sometimes it doesnt always work that way.I may seem cruel and all of this subject but as i submit my poems in here you will grow to learn i have been broken once to many by men and i cant stand people who still believe in true love.Its not real if it was i would have found it by now. |
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Re: You Hold My Heart
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 12:47:23 AM AEST
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| Maybe this love comes from somewhere higher than men! Very beautiful poem. blessings! |
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Re: You Hold My Heart
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 01:28:46 AM AEST
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True love exists. If it didn't, from where do you think we got our idea that love is imperfect? There has to be a standard is we realize that something isn't right. Where would that perfect love come from but a Perfect Being?
Hope, your heart's in good hands.
Take care.
David |
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