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- Moonlit Garden -
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
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Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 07:35:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I quietly step into the peaceful haven
Alone, with no wretched soul to harm me
My dress of plain white silk brushed the white stone floor
Eyes of deep angelic blue look around this place of beauty
Lovely, white doves circle around the precious moon
Tall, pure white arches hang over me
Emerald green ivy coils through them
Perfect blood red roses grow among the speared fences
White lily’s sway in the cold, welcoming wind
The shimmering moon blankets the flowers in an everlasting hold
I follow the turning path hoping to find an answer
A clear answer to unlock my wandering, lonesome heart
The capturing, silver stars hoard the ravishing night
A haunting, bleak song intervenes my miserable spirit
My lingering spirit breaks from it’s harrowing keep
I think to myself, I’m confined to wander this planet alone
The gleaming moon rises into the blinding unknown
Darkness entraps me, pulling me into a black hell
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2003-12-31 19:35:17]
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Re: - Moonlit Garden -
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by Blaze on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 08:28:56 PM AEST
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| The imagery is eerily beautiful. Nice poem. |
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Re: - Moonlit Garden -
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 08:47:20 PM AEST
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wooooooo!!!!!!!! it was like I was right there with you great picture yo painted here
michelle |
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Re: - Moonlit Garden -
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 01:54:37 AM AEST
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I hear ya.
Awesome work of art!
Best New Year ever, peace, joy, luv, hope,
emy |
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Re: - Moonlit Garden -
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 05:57:37 AM AEST
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This absolutely obliterates any notion of beauty I previously had. I am awe-struck. One of the best i've read in a long time, I love your style so much.
Truly (and still stunned),
-V.S. |
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Re: - Moonlit Garden -
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by alixia12 on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 06:06:48 AM AEST
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| i thought ur poem Moonlit Garden was very heartfelt and beautiful.I know its hard to understand the choices you make and where they would take you.You soon will understand that the things you've done have a reason for being.But your not alone you will find someone and when you do you'll regret ever thinking they weren't there. |
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Re: - Moonlit Garden -
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by justjonesy on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 02:37:21 AM AEST
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| Very good imagry...you write like a artist paints....i love the style |
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