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Love??
Contributed by
SkYYBLu
on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 07:15:30 PM in AEST
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I have an identity
You are meaningless
All men are created equal
I'm as valuable as you
I love you for your compassion
A compassion just like mine
Not afraid to search the depths
That lies within
Fallen into oneself
We tread oppisite paths
Yet I can feel your warmth
Forsaken I feel cold
I crave it
I crave you
I don't need you
Leave me alone
Leave me unaltered
The way I've always been
Alone
I love you
I hate the way I love you
You have been loved before
I haven't
I've only loved
All beckons have been denied
I hate you
An identity so false
Friend or foe?
I'll never know
All I know is that I love you
I love you for caring
Or at least pretending to
I'll never know
You make me feel like I'm worth something
I'm still here
All of the times we've fallen
We've fallen for each other
We have something
What is it?
Is it love?
It can ne'er be!
No one has ever loved me
Yet you tell me that you love me...
You tell me that I mean something
I've never meant anything
To anybody
I've never tried to be
But always wanted to be
Important
Friend or foe?
I'll never know
All I know is that I love you
I despise myself for loving you
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SkYYBLu
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2003-12-31 19:15:30]
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Re: Love??
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 10:24:31 PM AEST
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| wow...this is such a creative way of looking at things. I liked it a lot. :) |
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Re: Love??
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 02:04:55 AM AEST
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Makes perfict sense 2 me.
Does that make me skitsofrentic?
Very good, awesomely creative.
I'm sure more can relate than u think.
Great woek!
Happiest new year ever, peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Love??
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by justjonesy on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 02:34:54 AM AEST
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| this is very good...very original....kind of reminds me of something i write or maybe think.....anyways keep writin |
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