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Face In The Mirror (part 3)
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 06:49:30 PM in AEST
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I reached for the candle that was sitting on the sink, looked up and saw the face in the mirror. I ran for the door, swung it open and ran down the hall.
I screamed out to my friends.
There was no answer.
I headed into the livingroom, where my friends lay sleeping.
I flung the blankets off them.
"OH MY GOD!"
There was blood.
Blood everywhere.
I ran out into the hallway, snuck around the corner and looked for something to use as a weapon.
I found a bat behind a door.
I heard footsteps.
Coming closer, closer.
I peeped around the corner.
Nothing.
The hall was an empty shell.
I turned around.
There was the face.
The face in the mirror.
I took the bat and swung it as hard as I Possibly could.
WHACK!
The body dropped to the floor, like a dead weight.
I knelt down tosee if it was still alive.
I noticed the face was a mask.
I pulled up the mask, to reveal what was underneath.
I jumped back, let out a loud scream and dropped to my knees.
The face that was under the mask, was my best friend.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
June.3/2003
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2003-12-31 18:49:30]
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Re: Face In The Mirror (part 3)
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 12:19:58 AM AEST
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hmmm... loved it till the friend under the mask part.... maybe you could continue it and have it be a ghost posing as the friend, {my original thoughts were it was a ghost} made me very sad, made me wonder if the person telling the story {you lol}, was really the true killer, yup, i would definatly suggest you go on and make a twist to it, great writing tho, wonderful images in all three parts so far:) hugs n' love nessa
p.s. happy new year! |
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Re: Face In The Mirror (part 3)
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by arden on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:42:30 PM AEST
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wow.... i kinda saw that coming.
loved it though.
really good. keep it up.
Arden |
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