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Alpha fades Omega
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 05:10:51 PM in AEST
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Alpha fades Omega.
The beginning fades the end.
She sings to death
as my blood drips from her parted lips.
Pale skin and crimson lips
drew me in and sucked me down..
Alpha feeds Omega
As the beginning chases down
the end.
She the beginning and I the end.
Simple smiles and sweet words
drew her in to die.
Blinded by yesteryear
she never saw the knife..
Alpha loved Omega.
Alpha, Omega's sacrifice.
Penetrated her like never before.
Blood on her lips this time
hers.
This kiss in her dying light.
Orgasm with her final breath
with her blood on my lips.
One final fatal kiss between
Alpha and Omega.
Alpha loved Omega.
Omega hated Alpha.
Alpha I love you to death...
The book of the faulty phoenix.
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2003-12-31 17:10:51]
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 05:22:33 PM AEST
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Hmmm..interesting... still trying to understand it fully here..
Happy New Year, Jeff!!
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by SkYYBLu on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 06:07:17 PM AEST
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WOW
I loved this poem. It's so original and vivid! |
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 06:13:24 PM AEST
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Strong images, well done
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 06:24:55 PM AEST
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I really like this Gothic style of yours. A true lover of dark poetry, I call this a masterpiece.
Very well done
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 07:26:00 PM AEST
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I don't quite have this figured out either... oh well, maybe you'll explain it to me. The line about the knife is awesome. I'm sure if I understood it, I'd love it, lol. You're so beyond me sometimes. Grr.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 09:12:43 PM AEST
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"Alpha fades Omega" That drew me in initially. This was very interesting to read and mysterious. The more I read the more I wanted to know...
Kie |
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 11:31:45 PM AEST
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Yeah, me too, it's definently misterious.
Still trying to grasp it.
what is the faulty phoenix?
Happy New Year, luv, joy, peace, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by venkat on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 12:56:33 AM AEST
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| Powerful, sensual and dark imagery..seems like a master piece of gothic art...venkat |
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 01:30:47 AM AEST
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Wow..... this is......
Beautiful, dark, just awesome Jeff!!
Happy New Year!
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 03:09:22 AM AEST
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dude I loved this. Whose 'Raven' though? I can't rave enough about this poem it was all so awesome
This kiss in her dying light.
Orgasm with her final breath
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO strong.
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 03:23:33 PM AEST
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| Oh geezz this is terrific. Wow truely dark and really passionate. I really love it! What a tragic ending (but really fitting) Definitely 2 thumbs up! |
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by karoody on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 03:13:15 PM AEST
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wow, you've quite an imagination...i enjoyed this one...i guess this might be a unique idea for some, but i had no problem understanding it...bravo!
kara |
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by Avis_Nigra on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 07:17:04 PM AEST
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| I buy it. It is authentic it is real. It is you. it is poetry. |
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by Jolly on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 09:39:35 PM AEST
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| I wish I understood your poetry...i read it over and over and over...in the end I just find myself saying..okay, she broke your heart...you're hurt and spewing out hate. Let's hear something new...lighter please. But maybe I misintrepret..sorry about that spelling...that's why God made spell check (lol) tell me to kiss off...any comments all to the good around here, if you ask me! |
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Re: Alpha fades Omega
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by RochelleLloyd on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 01:02:01 AM AEST
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| I was deeply touched by this one. The story here (in the way i understood it to read) almost mirrors my mothers life. Thanks for sharing. Wonderful Read! |
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