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brown kandy
Contributed by
stitches
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Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 03:27:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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lick my eyes to cleanse the horrors
a cowering child should never see
scream at the demons loitering there
conjuring sic scenes inside of me
"rubber dreams of stormy skies
leave kandy in an open grave"
beckoning my fading will
to face this hell one less day
feed me with your cooking spoon
powder my nose, scar my arms
my lips have cracked and bled with it
my body wasted away
the nazis streaming down my legs
pouring from my brain
carnage is the wanting
and "they" all laughed at this game
now live my life of solitude
this guilt is mine alone
with the shadows i have danced
in the day, they follow me
at dusk, they bathe me in their gloom
and the mist returns to haunt in me
holding me, loving me
reminding me of you
please, i need it, give it to me, this is the last one i swear, oh god i'll die if you don't,
just one more "bump"
and that one more was all it took
i...am...so...sorry
and i will pass, just one more day
one day, always one day at a time
before the blades embrace me
that mesmerizing flash of fate
crimson needs the sharpness
and in return
the warm red glow
Copyright ©
stitches
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2003-12-31 15:27:52]
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Re: brown kandy
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 04:27:12 PM AEST
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| Wow that took me back deep into my own nightmares.... Amazing... Just amazing. |
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Re: brown kandy
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 07:26:10 PM AEST
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Bobo? Thats my nickname... I don't really know what this was about, but it definitely was good and I loved it all so I won't just pick out one line and write some meaningless comment about it. Hmm ne way good poem. *blinks a few times*
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Re: brown kandy
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 02:38:53 PM AEST
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I cant say i completely understand this either, but i think thats why i was so captivated by it.. I love your flow of words - dont ever give up writing, okay??!
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: brown kandy
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by stitches on
Monday, 5th January 2004 @ 07:54:52 AM AEST
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| i'm not sure if i can post this or not, but the write was about me giving my friend her first bump of heroin. it eventually killed her. |
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Re: brown kandy
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 10:37:54 AM AEST
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| Wow... Sorry about that. It still took me back into my nightmares and it was still damn good. |
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