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The End Of Fall
Contributed by
Elf
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Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 01:59:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Behold, that cold November's eve.
The one I love is soon to leave.
I've not the strength to say nor do,
To show the love I feel is true.
Now the days are short, my nights are long.
Still I sitt, staring where he belongs.
Empty now, is my heart.
My soul and life are rent apart.
Yet I live, silent as these nights.
Waitind for him to return from his plight.
Alas, I find he's found anouther.
Made haste, made her a mother.
So the love I thought we shared,
now destroyed when the truth is bared.
I've not the strength to act at all.
As my love leaves forever, witah the end of fall.
Copyright ©
Elf
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2003-12-31 13:59:43]
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Re: The End Of Fall
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 02:53:20 PM AEST
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Sad and strong emotions in this write. I could feel the pain in your words.
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Re: The End Of Fall
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 02:06:29 AM AEST
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Betrayal, treason. He didn't know how to treat love, and so he lost it. I'm sending a hug. Hope it helps.
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