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Broken Pieces
Contributed by
Elf
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Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 01:50:59 PM in AEST
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Oh, that faithful day,
When you arrived.
You stole my heart.
I was surprised.
Struck with passion,
Bound by lust.
You created a perfect picture,
But it was soon to bust.
You brought me out
from the depths of the darkness
With who you made me into,
Everyone was impressed
Then you let go,
and with such speed I did fall.
I had begun to rely on you.
Fo any and all.
Soon I remembered
that I could fend.
And I stopped my fall
just short of the end.
Now I neil low,
to pick up all that I left
Not believing what you did to me.
Left me so completely bereft.
Copyright ©
Elf
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2003-12-31 13:50:59]
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Re: Broken Pieces
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 05:40:27 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading your poem. The last two lines really got to me. Thank you for sharing it.
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Re: Broken Pieces
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 02:09:28 AM AEST
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You really know how to convey emotions. I'm sorry that they have to be sad ones. Take care.
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