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You Complete Me

Contributed by Vitreous_Soul on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 06:58:59 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry





You make me feel like i've never felt before
You've unlocked my heart and opened up my door
With every passing day I love you so much more
The best things in life are worth waiting for

No matter what I say or what I ever do
Never forget how deeply I love you
I read between the lines and sometimes misconstrue
But never could I deny something I feel so true

Look deep into my eyes and you'll see
That you forever will complete me

You pulled me from my dark and hate-filled shell
Emotional purgatory, my own personal hell
I owe you to no end, something I could never tell
Every moment with you is where I wish to eternally dwell

You make me feel like i've never felt before
To do you any wrong hurts me ten times more
And while life seems to be a never ending war
Knowing we'll be together always makes my spirit soar

Tears of joy run down my face when I imagine how it'll be
When the day finally comes, when you complete me




Copyright © Vitreous_Soul ... [ 2003-12-31 06:58:59]
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Re: You Complete Me (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 07:47:24 AM AEST
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I definitely appreciate this. Very well written.


Re: You Complete Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 11:01:14 AM AEST
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I have read your poem about half a dozen times. I am armed with kleenex to simply comment. I found this touchingly beautiful. I could just imagine opening a card and finding these words. This is one of the top ten best poems I have ever read.

Kie


Re: You Complete Me (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 11:03:03 AM AEST
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wow...


Re: You Complete Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 11:17:20 AM AEST
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An excellent write.
Love your work.
Bravo...


Re: You Complete Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 11:27:07 AM AEST
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very beautiful poem...wow, i dont even know what to say...I've re-read this a few times and well, just wow! goood job


Re: You Complete Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Chadene_Gillespie on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 12:46:50 PM AEST
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this is a very touching and moving poem. good job.


Re: You Complete Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 01:51:52 PM AEST
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Wow. An absolutely fantastic poem. And oh, the last two lines . . . I'm sniffling here.

It'll come, Dan. It'll come someday.

dusk and daybreak,
Nora


Re: You Complete Me (User Rating: 1 )
by eternal_sorrows on Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 02:46:04 AM AEST
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This is absolutly gorgeous! A beautifully perfect write! i see no reason you would have hesitated posting this one!

es


Re: You Complete Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 02:15:21 AM AEST
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Truely beautiful. I hope you find the address..
~T


Re: You Complete Me (User Rating: 1 )
by CountryGirl on Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 01:46:26 PM AEST
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I feel this. And understand exactly where you are coming from. Thanks for sharing. It's nice to know someone else out there feels the same.


Re: You Complete Me (User Rating: 1 )
by fallen_eyes on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 09:11:59 AM AEST
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wow. now i know why luke said your an amazing write. the words you chose are so easy to relate to, I really like this poem.
Tammy x


Re: You Complete Me (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:43:34 PM AEST
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Wow!! I really love this poem it reminds me so much of how I truly feel about my boyfriend.
Whoever wrote it thanks for opening my eyes, to your truly beautiful poem


Re: You Complete Me (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 09:13:54 AM AEST
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Dan, i dont know how i missed this but i shall repent every day for the rest of my life, dan this was perfect, except now this letter has an address, a very lucky one :)
I loved everything about this, ive already read it over and over i just cant stop im a man possessed, and your the drug lol

great write dan truely beautiful

Luke




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