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Life without You
Contributed by
suzy
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Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 03:37:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Does the hurt ever really go away?
This I’ve wondered often times
You left with out a word to say
I thought we had just hit our prime
Looks like I was wrong yet again
Now the thoughts run freely
I’m left with all this pain
Considering it all carefully
What did I do so wrong?
Could I ever make it right?
The signs were there all along
Didn’t see what was in plain sight
Maybe I just didn’t want to
Didn’t want to let you go
What is life without you?
Looks like I’ll soon know.
Copyright ©
suzy
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2002-08-30 15:37:45]
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Re: Life without You
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by MisterRight on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 06:01:11 PM AEST
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That's really one of the saddest things I've read in awhile, probably because I'm in the same place right now.
Great Write, actually made me tear
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Re: Life without You
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 08:31:05 PM AEST
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This is sad, but s beautifully written...
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Re: Life without You
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 31st August 2002 @ 08:26:21 AM AEST
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A poignant and beautiful poem Lasca...so very sad though. Thinking of you..
Chrissie x |
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Re: Life without You
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by Maha on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 04:04:49 AM AEST
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This is a very lovely and touching poem. The pain never goes away, Suzy, it just hides in a far corner of your heart.
If you will accept my advice, never blame your self for the cruelty of others, if someone caused you pain feel happy because you discovered their real ugly face under the disguise! |
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Re: Life without You
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by Patricia_Petro on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 04:51:10 AM AEST
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Oh, Suzy, so sad. Strikes a chord because I'm in that same place you are. It sure does feel like it's always going to hurt. Found a wonderful quote on Circle of Hope I posted on my site:
"No man or woman is worth all your tears
and the one who is won't make you cry." So true. Hope you find a way to get past it. When you do, let me know what it is...I could use some help, too.
~Patricia xx |
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