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Save Your Tears
Contributed by
exiled
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Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 03:53:26 AM in AEST
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(Save Your Tears)
Is it such a surprise to say
Jesus has risen on this day
would have killed his own mother
just to have a taste
between her legs
sin flows in this way
smoke has thickened
deceit is here to stay
mothers are crying
standing at their childrens graves
screaming is so sharp now
the apple is raughting
and the unpure virgin speaks
you fill your mouth with a bloody kiss
and fold to your knees
save your tears of pity
save your tears of hate
the world is a cold dark place now
cant you feel the pain
is it such a surprise to say
that god has lost this game
wrapped in an ocean
of our own tears and blood
memories shall not remain
our lives nothing but shadows and dust
souls have all gone blank
growing cold and grey
full your mouth with a bloody kiss
and learn to love the taste.
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Re: Save Your Tears
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 04:14:33 AM AEST
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| Dark and very bold..sin flows today..it is a reality. venkat |
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Re: Save Your Tears
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 11:05:21 AM AEST
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| so vivid, dark and disturbing, wow |
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Re: Save Your Tears
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by CuttersAngel on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 04:09:25 PM AEST
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| I don't really know what to say... I love it.... but even words won't justify the greatness of this piece of work.... |
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Re: Save Your Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:32:15 PM AEST
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hey sam whats up this poem was great, my man loves it too. you need to call me sometime and let me know how you are doing. or else i'm gonna hurt you [ ha-ha].
natisha
sam this is josiah i got to say that was the best poem i've read in a long time i would compare you to morrison but i can't do that but you do the art justice but i truely respect that poem it was realism at it's finest |
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Re: Save Your Tears
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:14:58 PM AEST
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Sam,
This poem was disturbingly pleasant. To the point where I almost feel dirty for saying that I liked it so much. It's like so truthful, yet so vivid in details of the bad. Thank you for sharing. Loved it.
Lindsey |
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Re: Save Your Tears
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by Elazul on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:24:31 PM AEST
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| the type of work i'v come to expect from ya sam, and on a side note i'm David. well guess i'll await your next creation |
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