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A Dream or Not?
Contributed by
parisstcair
on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 11:56:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Talking to my lover made me want to cry.
Hearing the sound of his sexy voice seemed like it was my time to die.
Everthing around me became so unclear.
I started to laugh outrageous at things that weren't even real.
I was losing my mind.
I seemed to get dizzy.
So I layed down in my bed.
I thought about him in my head.
Saying over and over again.
Lay my body down and let him touch my body.
When he said " I'll call you back."
My dream seemed to be ended.
Now I'm questioning " A Dream or Not?"
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parisstcair
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2003-12-30 23:56:31]
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Re: A Dream or Not?
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 11:59:29 PM AEST
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Very creative!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: A Dream or Not?
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by shadowmaster_045 on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:38:27 PM AEST
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Definite 5 star poem no brainer
this poem has meaning life and soul
it brings me joy and sorrow or so i'm told
but as the puppeteer your taking my life away.
--sry bout that little thought
but this poem is so good i love your style! :o) |
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