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Depression
Contributed by
suzy
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Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 03:34:50 PM in AEST
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Depression is so very much a part of me
That life wouldn’t be life without it
Often times my future I just can’t see
Another piece to my puzzle that doesn’t fit
Some days I just want to lie in bed
If I stay there I won’t have to face the world
All these suicidal thoughts run through my head
And I think to myself what a foolish girl
If I killed myself what would it fix?
I would only cause more pain
Throw someone else into this mix
That I find myself in time and again
That’s not exactly fair to them or me
So I try to be strong and pull myself thru
So many times I wished I could be free
I don’t know anymore what to do
My cries couldn’t be any louder if I tried
Does anyone here them at all?
Thousands of tears I have cried
I’m scared this time I will fall
I’ve only stumbled in the past
Always found something to hold on to
This time it doesn’t look like it will last
I feel like this is life and my time here is through
Copyright ©
suzy
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2002-08-30 15:34:50]
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Re: Depression
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by BluGurl6 on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 04:23:18 PM AEST
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| wow. this is a very strong write. it really touched me because i'm going through depression right now. |
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Re: Depression
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 08:58:03 PM AEST
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Suzy, if you need a shoulder to cry on..or an ear..please feel free to e-mail me..ok... jennical43@hotmail.com This was well written
Jenni |
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Re: Depression
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st August 2002 @ 12:09:46 AM AEST
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| These are the words that I have been looking for. This describes exactly how i feel right now. It is also a great write. I hope you find something to hang on to. |
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Re: Depression
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by Patricia_Petro on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 04:37:43 AM AEST
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Lasca,
Wow...very powerful poem. I sure hope it's fiction...just a mild bout of depression you've exaggerated for effect. If not, write me...PLEASE! We've all got sorrows, and maybe if we share our stories, you'll see you're not alone.
~Patricia xx |
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