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Passing By
Contributed by
EmSal
on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 08:25:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Only seeing things in black and white,
Not being able to tell wrong from right,
Living this life labelled as all a lone,
Everyday passing by my headstone.
Captions are written about my life before I lay to rest,
One stuck on my headstone 'Failed lifes test'
Passing by happiness all around, I just couldn't see,
That this world digested my emotions and was now killing me.
Only seeing thigs in black and white,
Dieing a little more with each passing night.
I breathe this breath for me and me a lone,
Still passing by my unkept headstone.
Captions are written about me before I lay to rest,
One stuck on my body bag 'Body suicide messed'
Passing by hope as I moved on, I just couldn't be,
So I know that it was I who physically killed me.
Not able to see things how I want anymore,
Always doing wrong just like many times before,
Not living, not drifting, I am not here,
As I gave in to my cries and to my fear.
Copyright ©
EmSal
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2003-12-30 20:25:36]
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Re: Passing By
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 09:00:16 PM AEST
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Wow. I really liked this one. Especially the second stanza, and the ideas expressed in it.
Hope you feel better soon.
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Re: Passing By
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 10:59:36 PM AEST
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Oh Emmy you sound like a tortured soul.
Please don't be so discouraged and depressed, are you writing in the present, or is this in the past!
Whatever dear Emmy...I hope it's over for you?
Love you,
ConSue
Very good emotion packed poem! |
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Re: Passing By
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by eternal_sorrows on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 03:13:08 AM AEST
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Wow! I am blown away. Deep raw emotion. Great write!
es |
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Re: Passing By
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 06:17:34 AM AEST
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Aww hun, another one that I can relate to. I am constantly feeling as though each day, another part of me dies. I loved this write. Very emotional and powerful.
Stacey |
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