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That's not
Contributed by
jonteD
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Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 02:36:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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That's not a tear you see,
Just the wind caught my eye.
That's not a broken heart,
Just me catching my breath.
That's not me crying out loud,
Just a low flying jet gone by.
That's not me in a trance,
Just stumbled, not yet awake.
That's not a lonely man,
Just me walking the dog.
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jonteD
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2003-12-30 14:36:14]
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Re: That's not
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 05:18:53 PM AEST
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Wind caught your eye, huh?
Let me .....errr never mind...:>)
Hugs
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Re: That's not
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 08:21:44 PM AEST
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Well now, sorry didn't see your name on Jennie's poem till after I commented.
Great work and this one is awesome. Very glad u jus playing a round.
Good job.
So what do u do when u really have fun?
peace, joy, luv, playing,
emy
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