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Chocolate Cake
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
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Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 01:00:49 PM in AEST
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I am a dance between time,
blue skies, gentle breezes,
flowers, alive and dead,
a sleeping meadow of nectar,
I am happiness and sadness,
wind, storm, lightening and rainbows,
I am dark, lonely, and cheerful,
black, white, and purple,
a scent of earth,
crushed within the black sun, and the hollow moon,
I am unwanted and abused,
frightened and fearless,
musical and worn,
a firestorm of anguish, laughter, and desire,
a torn heart, smashed in my palm,
I am my mother's sorrow, my father's tears,
my sisters' hate, my brothers' love,
my child's heart, and my husband's soul,
I am pain beneath the clouds,
a bare tree, trying to reach heaven,
I am the mountian and the waterfall,
the river and the stream,
and on Friday evening, I become chocolate cake,
Dancing!
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Valerie_Pearson
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2003-12-30 13:00:49]
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Re: Chocolate Cake
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 03:53:17 PM AEST
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| Val, nice to see your writing again on here! Great work,loved this! I love Choc. cake especially this one! Christina |
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Re: Chocolate Cake
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 04:04:38 PM AEST
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this is a breath taking write. If you turn into chocolate cake dont come by me though I may be tempted to take a bite ROFLMAO!! Ok I was just kidding dont want to scare you Val tee hee hee hee,anyway great job!
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Re: Chocolate Cake
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 05:22:34 PM AEST
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I;m with Michelle here..stay far from me.....:>)
Hugs
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Re: Chocolate Cake
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 08:27:39 PM AEST
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Yeah, me three, what they said.
Luv chocolet cake.
Great writing!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Chocolate Cake
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 06:56:40 AM AEST
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it looks like some thing special preparation...a tasty chacolate cake..God..what an amazing write.
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Re: Chocolate Cake
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 12:16:03 PM AEST
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A boundless spirit
omnivorous
exuberant
delicious
Bob |
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Re: Chocolate Cake
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by SkYYBLu on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 12:12:20 AM AEST
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| Very creatively written! I really liked it. :) |
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Re: Chocolate Cake
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 11:02:02 PM AEST
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well lmao.....you truly are all things arent you!! I love the turn you took with this at the end, and I loved every line before.
Very creative write!
Larry |
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