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A Child's Revenge
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
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Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 11:51:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A child sits alone in her room
Looking at the bruises left by the broom
She was told she was bad and misbehaved
So a few good hits her mother gave
Her mom is abusive but doesn't care
She didn't want this child, to her it's unfair
Brook is this child's name
Look in her eyes and see the pain
She cries in her room alone at night
But now she's decided that it's time to fight
The next day her mom goes to hit her again
She tells ehr mom that this time she won't win
Brook grabs the bat and swings at her mom
She realizes she's wanted to do this all along
A couple good hits and that's all it takes
Before she realizes this extreme mistake
Her mom lies on the floor, not moving at all
The neighbors hear her scream and the police are called
Brook is arrested and detained
If the police only knew this child's pain
She is in trouble but she doesn't regret
Cuz the things her mom did she'll never forget.
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CuttersAngel
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2003-12-30 11:51:06]
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Re: A Child's Revenge
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by gery_giggles on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 12:36:32 PM AEST
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whoa.....very dark.........the emotion in here is deep..........very good write
luv always |
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Re: A Child's Revenge
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 01:52:53 PM AEST
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| very deep write, glad you shared this, it should open a few eyes, take care Val |
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Re: A Child's Revenge
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 03:52:51 AM AEST
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| very great. i really felt sorry for brook, and her mom deserved what she got ( i love kids ). keep it up. |
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