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Rock Bottom
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
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Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 11:43:09 AM in AEST
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The anger I have is so unreal
With this depression my fate is sealed
The yelling, screaming, all the fighting
Running away and all this hiding
Two tears slowly stream down my cheek
While writing this poem inside I weep
The silence I've kept through all these years
Has now become my family's deepest fear
When I lash out the truth is known
Revealing the feelings I've never shown
And after it's over and I'm finally done
Silence and shock starts to overcome
They never knew I felt this way
They never thought these things I'd say
They never knew I held this hate
And the only thing I can do is wait
My dad's never home, he lives his life
And left behind are his kids and wife
So I push him away and forget he exists
He asks what he's done and why I'm p*st
He gave up and left us all
Now rock bottom is where I fall.
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CuttersAngel
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2003-12-30 11:43:09]
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 12:24:35 PM AEST
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you have an awesome way of expressing your self with pen and paper such raw emotion what a way to let it go
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 12:08:09 AM AEST
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Parents never know as much as they think they do. I know what that's like. I also relate to the part about your father. He was a big part of the reason I moved out. I really enjoyed this write, I'll be looking for more.
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 11:36:38 PM AEST
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Two tears slowly stream down my cheek
While writing this poem inside I weep
I've been there soooooo many times. I can't relate to the whole dad's never home thing but the poem as a whole was mindblowing as usual.
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