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draining
Contributed by
a_t0rtured_s0ul
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Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 03:36:22 AM in AEST
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I poured my soul out to you,
I let you see into my tormented mind,
Now I constantly sing the blues,
As every word you speak is unkind.
Words meant to destroy my soul,
Successfully obliterating,
Showing your heart as black as coal,
Never caring about anything.
Treating me as if I'm less than human,
I'm not allowed to feel,
Everything but agonizing pain banned,
My heart, soul, and esteem you did steal.
You played me hard, spirit so mean,
Made me believe you weren't like the others,
I was stupid to treat you like a king,
Instead all you say is that I smother.
Mind always running,
Soul always aching,
You always shunning,
My life draining and my earth quaking.
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Re: draining
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 03:49:11 AM AEST
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I luv your style.
Very good as this very moving!
I can relate 2 this one very well. the last one taught me a huge leason but not how he intended.
When everythings gone but my sanity I let I had 2 send him on his way. That was four years ago and I havn't dated since.....So I tottally relate.
two thumbs up!!
peace, joy, luv, huggs,
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Re: draining
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by Fudge on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 09:26:38 PM AEST
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| wow this is written wonderfully. i like the words you chose. it reminds me of how i used to write. i think it's great. |
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Re: draining
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 04:14:14 PM AEST
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| yeah i agree. i think a lot of people can relate to this and, like your other poems, it conveys the feelings and thoughts present at the time of writing. |
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