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It's Over
Contributed by
pugnaciouspixie
on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 09:35:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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"I know you, you say,"
as you look into my eyes.
"You wouldn't do it," you challenge,
"you're a fake, you lie!"
I cry aloud,
shaking off tears,
I point the gun to your head
and whisper in your ear.
"You're a bad person,
and soon you're gonna die.
Just do me a favor-
don't whine or cry."
I'll show you,
just you wait.
"This is my revenge.
This is our fate."
Tears rolling off my cheek,
I close my eyes.
"Yes, this is what happens,
when you ruin people's lives!"
Your life slips,
and you try to grasp it.
But it's too strong
and you fall gasping.
I force a laugh,
and hold my head high.
It starts to rain
and I look up at the sky.
Turning to go,
I wish him good luck in hell,
then he shoots me in the back,
and to the ground I fell.
So now here I am,
dead as can be.
It's all your fault...
I mean... you cheated on me.
If you wouldn't have lied
or got caught in the act,
you wouldn't be in a coffin,
lying on your back.
But of course you did,
and got me ...
You're the reason
our marriage ended like this.
"To have and to hold
'til death do us part..."
I should've just left you,
right from the start.
Oh well, life's a
and then you die,
looks like it's over,
sweetie pie...
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pugnaciouspixie
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2003-12-29 21:35:35]
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Re: It's Over
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by Cancer on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 09:54:56 PM AEST
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well for what it's worth, if it's worth anything at all, i thought it was funny. if you tilt your head just right, even ironic. in any case, i liked it.
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Re: It's Over
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 05:09:59 PM AEST
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| Indeed Cancer. I do agree. I thought this was great and I fully agree with the 'til death do we part part. I would never divorce... One of us would be dying... |
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