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First Kiss In The Rain
Contributed by
estelle_toh
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Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 04:51:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Snowy raindrops peeping thru my opened window
Watching me in a dreamy mode
Lingering scents of the tears from heaven
Awakened my once lost senses
Gentle caresses from the veil of water
Aroused images in my hidden quarters
Tasting the sweet nectar from the sky above
I reminisce about my first kiss in the rain with you
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Re: First Kiss In The Rain
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by jme on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 04:55:35 PM AEST
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| Beautiful! |
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Re: First Kiss In The Rain
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 05:00:37 PM AEST
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| Nice write. I think you have a very interesting style. I like many of the lines here. |
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